Comics - Ch02 Pg04 - January 30th, 2008, 5:00 pm

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Luckey Starr, January 30th, 2008, 4:51 pm ( Reply )

Tah-dah!
So... Lance and Bee have a page together.. Finally. *coughs*

Anyway, this page was VERY lazy. Took about an hour to put together. Just so you know, the picture was a little sketch I drew forages ago and I blew it up for this page. So if it looks distorted.. It is.

For anyone who noticed, yes! This is the first appearance of Bee's and Lance's legs! As you can see, Bee likes the knee length skirt. Also the first appearance of the full boy's uniform. Very basic on purpose. I originally planned to have the pants dark purple and the tie light, but I grayscaled it backwards.. Oh well.

I didn't wanna draw a background or use a school hallway tone as planned, so I just went with a basic "sunlight" theme. Don't know why I chose it, I just did.

Anyway, on to the dialogue! Bee works at a local fast food place to save money for college. She's the only one of the group that works.

Thanks for reading everyone! Sorry for the long comment! Next page will be fun and soon, I promise! Comments are <3 and forum goers are <33!!




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Luckey Starr, January 30th, 2008, 5:07 pm ( Reply )


Oh, and just so everyone knows, the results of the first poll in the forum...

Who is your favorite character?
0 votes -Luckey
2 votes -Bee
1 vote -Kandie
1 vote -Lance

Bee is the winner!! ... Poor Luckey.. D:

Oh, and there's a new poll up, please vote! ^_^


kirbyboy102, January 30th, 2008, 5:50 pm ( Reply )


moo. Bee has popeye arms and fat legs. anorexic and obese at the same time.


suzmya icigo, January 30th, 2008, 6:23 pm ( Reply )

awwww
i can just tell thats gonna be sweet cuite page


Luckey Starr, January 31st, 2008, 12:30 am ( Reply )


kirbyboy102- =O Like I said, this was a thumbnail sketch that I blew up for the page. It's been distorted and I didn't fix it up as well as I should have. And just so you know, I like thick legs. Ranma 1/2 looks better than Sailor Moon to me.

suzmya icigo- Thank you for the comment! ^_^ I hope you visit again.


Yoon-jung, January 31st, 2008, 6:59 pm ( Reply )


Lol, that comment was harsh, you could have pointed out the problems in a nicer way kirbyboy102...
And there's a difference between your legs and the style of Ranma 1/2 legs. : /
Your anatomy is kind of wrong, that's what he's trying to point out.
:3
Just study your anatomy and you'll get better <3


Luckey Starr, February 1st, 2008, 12:20 am ( Reply )


I didn't exactly say I draw Ranma 1/2 style legs, I was just making a point.
And yes, my anatomy is bad. I'm not an artist. I've been saying from the beginning and I'll continue saying it now. I'm an author. No art skills period.

Anywho, thanks for the support. ^_^ Hope you guys don't mind the art too bad... :S


projectheart, February 1st, 2008, 3:06 am ( Reply )


Personally, I love Ranma 1/2 ^-^ It was the very first anime I ever watched! I would sing the soundtrack for weeks on end. ^^; Macross (or Robotech, for you Americans ^-^) was a close second.

Concerning proportion and anatomy: Any tips concerning this particular topic? Its a big problem for me as well >_< Any tips would be greatly greatly GREATLY appreciated.

Incidentally I dont think L-chan's art is bad (and I'm not being biased for being the co-author either, haha) ^-^ I've been drawing CRAP art for years before it ended up looking reasonably humanoid (literally, and I'm not being humble either). ^^; In fact Ive been doodling for so long that I'm rather ashamed by my sloth-like progress when it comes to art (especially with all the talented 14 and 15 and 16 year olds floating around >____<) But I agree with Yoon-jung, studying the anatomy and practice practice practice will help a lot for any artist who may be lacking in the 'naturally gifted' area (such as myself, yet I too am a poor example). Still, story wise, I love 'Luckey Me', and I'm pretty sure everyone will too once L-chan puts up more pages ^.~


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